it wouldnt show my email, so its what was in the subject line, @ hotmail . com

hi, you may or may not remember me,
but i was totally in love with your stories. something ive been meaning to do for a while is get back on here to see if you had finished sox in a box.
you would not believe how shattered i was when i found out you had removed all your stories!!

I just wanted to say that i'll miss reading your stuff and i hope you get published!
also, if you ever need someone to edit for you, my email is
hope to hear from you soon!!

OMGOSH! This is so good! I really love your characterisation of Moser! Is that really his name? i can't seem to find any indication otherwise. But, unique name. Off to create a livejournal account to read the rest of your stories!!

Love,
BluebirdandFluffy

hello..i would just like to say i loved your first chapter and i cant wait to read the rest! (currently making a account in livejournal)
cant wait to finish it!

Hello! I was recommended to your story by my friend and the opening line of this story really caught my eyes so I started reading it. Well, I am also somewhat of a baseball fan,though I am a Yankees fan -hides from the screaming Red Sox Fan- I'm from New York City so -blushes- In a way I have to support my home team, don't I?

Though I actually like the Mets better than the Yankees.

Your story have many catching lines, such as the opening. I love the way you phrased things, such as "It was the college brochure's fault." One thing I notice is that you chose very unique names for your main character. I don't think I ever heard anyone be called Zara before.

I really like the story and it's kind of upsetting that I won't be able to read it. Though after reading your plagiarism note, I would understand why you would want to take off your stories.

I absolutely adore this story, I am a baseball fan myself. I used to go for the Yankees but I'm a red sox fan! Even though I don't live in America, we've got it on foxtel over here in australia. All those MLB matches. Anyway I'm gonna stop babbling about baseball now and review your chapter one. I am one of the lucky ones who read your stories till the end before it got removed.

I absolutely adore this story. The characters were well-developed, and it was just hilarious. Especially about Finn's 'good-luck' challenges. He was truly an enjoyable character, and the rest of your characters too, as well. Zara, Raphaela and Clinton, if i remember it correctly, since it was quite a few months ago I read this.

I am glad you went for a cliche ending, some might disagree but I just love cliches. Sure, it may be unrealistic but I need some cliches in my uncliche life. haha~

I'm not sure if you have heard Authonomy, that site is really good to get your writings out there and maybe someday I might see your books on shelves over here in the land down under. Good luck : )

It's truly a shame that I never got to read the rest of this story before it was removed. I'm sorry to hear about the plagiarism attacks on you, and though it'll drive me nuts to wait, I hope you still have the chance to publish the many stories you've already written so I'll finally have the opportunity to read them (that sounded selfish, didn't it?). Good luck!

~Evvy

God! Please stop you're winning. Makes me sick. You knew that was a possibility when you signed up for this. You clearly weren't writing just to "improve [your] writing skills". Otherwise it wouldn't faze you that someone had stole your work. Obviously you got attached to what you thought was yours. But it's not. True it's low of someone else to steal your work and claim it as their and sure it sucks if they make money off you (however, then why the flip didn't you make money off yourself first?). Yeah all that blows. But that gives you no reason to be a B to all your loyal fans.
What's the worse that could happen if you leave your stuff up? Seriously? Do you think that at this level someone will go out and actually revise what you wrote a publish it and become a New York Times bestselling author? Cause that's about the time you should start complaining. And not until then.
So long as Fictionpress has the Copy/Paste option this will always be an issue.
Stop winning and give your fans the respect they deserve.

The opening line really caught my attention =]

I like this story, it really intrigues me. And I'm sad that it's been removed.
I heard about the LJ friends-only account where you'll be posting your stories from now on. And I'd really love to join.

Hope to read some more stories by you in the near future,
XoRhymes.

I'm so sorry that this happened. That blows but I'm glad you're getting those bastards sorted out. Good luck with writing and eventually getting published. When you do, I hope you'll let everyone know. Just by reading the first couple chapters, I know you're a damn good writer.
Cheers and good luck!
~fred

Aw,that completely sucks. Just want to say thanks for writing something decent, there is so much crap you have to trawl through but it's totally worth it when you find gems like yours. I don't even like or vaugely know how to play baseball, nor have i EVER seen a game, but i love your stories.

Good luck in the future, you deserve it. :)

AH! not this one too!
oh jeez, i just realized that you ALSO wrote Sox in a Box! crap crap crap this was my all time favorite : (

I hate plagiarizers so very much

i love you. i love you so much. I LOVE YOU. thanks for distracting me from my homework, but i seriously LOVE you. there is no other word to describe it!

ahha. sports are so intense.
and i totally get the whole 'broken-hearted-cause-their-team-ended-up-losing' thing. i pretty much bawled when the 'canes scored the empty-netter on the oilers to seal the game, winning the stanley cup. so painful to watch them hand the cup to brind'amour and the conn smythe to ward. gator shoulda been the one accepting the cup and roli or pisani should have gotten the conn smythe. T_T

ah, sorry about the babbling there, pretty sure you have no idea what im ranting about but i had to get it off my chest. XD

anywayss.. really liking this story as of right now, definitely believe i'll finish it =)

haha, great story, even though i don't understand baseball :]