Is it possible that after reading one chapter that I'm so hooked and wanting to read more? JustMaybe recommended you and ARGH I so wish you didn't get plagerized :( If I try to join LiveJournal will this story be on there?

How is it possible that with each first chapter of your stories I read, I become more and more interested with ALL of your stories!? I guess what captivated me the most was the similarity with the fact that I'm in love with Boston for some reason, although I've never been there, and I'm from California too! The interesting food habits of the guy in the cafeteria is very unique haha! Is he the same guy who Zara bumped into on the streets? If he was, then I was a little confused, because I didn't see anything that implied that :P I really want to be able to look forward to reading this story (and all your others) if I'm accepted on PlagiarismHaven! :)

Very cute. :) It's too bad I didn't get to finish this one. But you're a very good writer and I'm sorry that people keep plagiarizing you.

Awh, this sounds like it would be amazing! I hope you kept it up on LJ!

Aww...I'm sorry to hear that your story was plagiarized to the extent of you taking down your fiction. I'm interested enough in this story to make a lifejournal account and join this community. Hope to see more of this story there.

An extremely interesting start, I only wish I could read the rest of the story- well, I shall at least try to enter the LJ community. :)

I especially liked their little dialogue, it was rather entertaining. I also find myself disliking his eating choices. Ew.

I hope I will be able to read the rest of it on PH!

it's truly horrifying that someone wouldn't like Boston. and how could Red Sox fans ruin your day! I like the angry boy though and there is always a group of boys walking around decked in red sox gear. Then again all of my clothes are the same. Anyway, realistic Boston and great descriptions. good work.

i love that this story is so quirky and fun.i love the characters and their unique approach to the story.

Wow, this sounds like it would be a great story; I wish I would have found your stories earlier, before the plagiarism fiasco!

oh! I love stories involving unlikely pairings! I wish I would have found your work before the plagiarism fiasco!

The opening line of cornflakes with apple juice cracks me up!

Wow, this story sounds like it has so much potential! I love the main character, Zara, and her snarky comments. I can also relate a ton to the whole Red Sox culture (since i've been in the middle of it for a while...good old massachusetts). The summary makes this story sound so tempting, but I'm so sad that I can't read the rest of this because of some idiotic people who tried to steal your work. You are an amazing author, and I hope I can read more of your works in the future!

I know you've probably had quite a few of these sorts of reviews, but I have to say that I read every single one of your stories a few years ago, one after another, staying up all night to do so, and bloody LOVED them. You are a seriously talented writer, and I hope that the tossers (am I allowed to say that?) out there don't put you off writing. Good for you for sticking two fingers up to the idiots who would take a brilliant piece of writing and call it their own. I think it's a real testament to your talent that you can engage a reader equally when she's 15 as when she's 19. I haven't been on FF in a VERY long time, but yours was the first story I looked up. Bloody brilliant is all i have to say! If you have published/ever decide to do so, let me know! :)

Horrible food choices great couple. A great story that definetly is different from others and one i would derinetly read again if it wasn't for a few D-heads.

I really like the beggining of this story, and would like to continue reading it. Im going join livejournal :l