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| me 2008-10-10 ch 12, anon. | abuseOne of Dr. Moser's phrases, "money is not an objection," should probably read "money is not an object." |
| crazyhelga 2008-10-07 ch 13,  | abuseHidey ho! I don't think I will ever get over Typhoon Ophelia! That woman is a riot! And yay for Zara and Finn going on a date after the Playoffs. By the way, good luck to your BoSox, and hopefully they're better at taking out the Rays than my White Sox were! |
| beccabrighteyes 2008-10-03 ch 13, | abuseI don't know how this one got past me. Its great. Love the characters. (Finn sounds so cute!) |
| StaceyK94 2008-10-02 ch 13, | abuseWhere has Sox in a Box gone? It seems to be MIA, and we really miss it. Hopefully you can update soon. :) Stacey |
| Serolina 2008-10-01 ch 13, | abuseWHOT! This chapter was intense! I was bouncing up and down with them. lol I can't wait for the next chapter! Is marcie gonna be in it? |
| AriLeigh 2008-09-30 ch 13, | abuseI seriously don't have a story of yours that I DON'T like. You're such an amazing writer. This story is possibly the funniest thing I've ever read! haha. I can't wait for the next update to get my fill of the quirkiness. by the way, Finn's concoctions- EW! haha. |
| WitlessFool 2008-09-29 ch 12, | abuseI was just re-reading this chapter cause it's my favourite and it still makes me laugh. Pretty sure you didn't do it intentionally, but most if not all of Finn's mother's sentences end with an exclamation mark. It suits her personality brilliantly and haha, brilliant chapter. |
| Muted Velvet 2008-09-27 ch 3, anon. | abuseI'm loving this story so far...my only not-so-complaint is that I'm a Yanks fan (what do you expect? It's not as if NJ has any teams, and the Mets...), but still, lovin' it. (by the way, I'm being lazy and not logging in--Muted Velvet is my penname. |
| bec1246 2008-09-22 ch 13, | abusei am a huge fan of all of your stories and i just started reading this one and i have to say its FABULOUS! cant wait for more. love the character development and their flaws make them real and endearing. what does finn look like? i am having a hard time picturing him or zara. |
| Writing4Eternity 2008-09-18 ch 13, | abusePure awesomeness! The thing I like about baseball is it's unpredictabilities. Last month I was ready to bury my Astros but now we're only a few games back of the wild card. It's too bad Hurricane Ike screwed up our schedule with the Cubs. UHG!! I really hope they don't win the WS this year. |
| courtney colver 2008-09-18 ch 13, anon. | abuseI've been eying this story for a while...I love all of your other stories and had been wanting to check this story out for awhile and I'm very glad that I did. This is a great story! Thank you for sharing it. :) |
| cherrypiesizzle 2008-09-18 ch 13, | abuseAwesome. |
| Lady Knight 1512 2008-09-17 ch 13, | abuseYay! They won! That bodes well! And Finn and Zara finally talked properly. That was nice to see. And they're going on a date! This chapter made me happy, just in general. I'm so happy! LoL. As evidenced by the abundance of exclamation points. It's sad to see Finn's mother go, but something tells me she should only be taken in small doses. I really hope you'll be updating again soon! I can't wait for the next chapter! ~LK1512~ |
| Krissy 2008-09-17 ch 13, anon. | abuseI am SO glad that you updated! I was checking this site so often just because of this story! Great job and I can't wait for the new chapter! :D |
| PandasAreCute 2008-09-17 ch 13, | abuseYay! They won. They just had to...I mean it would be so sad if they didn't. Finn is starting to be more confident. =) It's nice. So will they go on a date now? |