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| Harmony'sSake 2008-02-19 ch 1,  | abuseI really liked this. We just did Haiku's in school so I love reading them now and this one is great. Good job! -Harmony |
| Basara 2008-02-12 ch 1, | abusetrue... that's the part where intellectual freedom versus established norms (either religious or other)... nice... |
| Faith Adeline 2008-02-08 ch 1, | abuselove it. amazing work. Faith |
| right2reality 2008-02-08 ch 1, | abuseI really loved this! It really speaks to me of emotions being suppressed simply through this irrational fear of actually putting yourself in the line of fire, open to persecution. I can also relate to it 100% which only emphasises the potency of your haiku for me. Anyways, I thought this was great, keep up the good work! -right2reality |
| Ygg 2008-02-08 ch 1, | abuseI like this poem in particular because it speaks to me personally. A subversive way of thinking is not easy. It's like swimming against the massive current of contemporary society; plus, free thinkers are thé enemy of the system. But on the other hand, it's the most direct way to regain our innate natural way of living, without the clothes, without the opinions and with only our sacred intuition as a guide through this wonderful Life we've been given. In the end, we would be genuinely free of all constraints; we would truly live instead of being lived by a society who has long cut the ties with its origines. Great work! |