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| fatbird33 2008-02-22 ch 1,  | abuseloev the star wars part of it!! and i loved all of it so good job. |
| Bob Evans 2008-02-09 ch 1, | abuseFun, fun. Even the very act seems somehow poetic coming from you, Jon. I've noticed you have a knack for picking up the negatives and hitting them home. But don't forget all those positives you've got hiding in there somewhere... |