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| Moondog Dozier 2008-02-20 ch 1,  | abuseExcellent sound switch progression. It echoes, before it echoes, if that makes any sense. Great haiku. MD:77. |
| Katrina Zeffirelli 2008-02-16 ch 1, | abuseOnce again, great job! You are very good at writing haiku! --Katrina Zeffirelli |
| Basara 2008-02-12 ch 1, | abusemuch more than meets the words formed... it speaks about the established self yet in some matter... find it too unfit for one's inner happiness... nice... |