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| Take the Money and Run 2008-02-19 ch 1, | abuseVery beautiful, the last line especially is amazing. i dont know what else to say...its just really great... |
| kloun mannequin 2008-02-19 ch 1, | abusethe imagery is raw, but the meaning so powerful, I like this line: the chap of your lips in a kiss great poem. |
| Shasta Valentine 2008-02-14 ch 1, | abusebeautiful. -sv |