Oh. It's awesome.

I've never seen anything like this.
Original, and the story itself is pretty sweet too.

Great story. Very well-written. I enjoyed it muchly :3

It's- it's so... Guh, Amazing! I can't even type in coherent sentences, it's that amazing. Is this for really your life? Either way, the story is so very well written. It's a great yuri love story, me likes it a lot.
p.s. Did I mention it's amazing?

Whoo, nonfiction. x3 So funny to hear what's going on with you in more detail. I kinda needed this, I suppose. Anywho, great story~ I really don't understand how you don't like your writing. To each their own. Good luck with your fun love life.

I really love this story. It's cute. I'm glad you're happy with her. . .

XD THIS REMINDS ME OF SOMETHING. But hey, write what you know, right? X3

D: This had me sad in the middle though. I swear, EMPATHY SUCKS. Butyes, I'm so so so glad you stayed with Val, because I think she's your "special someone".

such a cute story, i liked it.. keep writting good stuff like this