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| XxXKristie marieXxX 2008-05-15 ch 1, | abuseLove the last two lines lol. As for the rest its awsome and it flows great. Very cute! xKristie Mariex |
| purple x pen 2008-02-20 ch 1, | abusei like yours better XD |
| simpleplan13 2008-02-09 ch 1, | abusethe last two lines were pretty funny... the rest of it was good.. sonnets are especially hard things to write and I think he did a good job |