This story always manages to make me a happy happy person, with each and every update :) Great chapter. Can't wait for the next bit! And sorry I took so long to review!

~Carm~

Nice update ^^

That last scene was hilarious XD

I love the first chapter :)
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baha, i knew heather was a demon since you started to use 'these'.

Awesome job! I'm hooked to this! Cant wait to find out what happens next :)

I'm so glad I came across this story. It's fantastic! I can't wait to see what happens :)

~Carm~

Nice... -thumbsup- Good twist and an interesting plotline.

:) CD

Hm,interesting story but I like it so far.

I like it a lot. Your plot is fantastic. (now for the critizism) i dont like to critize, and i usually dont but im doing this because i like your story. a couple sentences i think could be fixed so your story flows better, other than that, i cant find anything wrong. its awesome, i love it.

Hey there.

Oh...interesting story here. Lust...sexy...xD You had some comma splices here and there, no biggie. Something that did bother me was your constant use of semi-colons...O.O They are a fun punctuation mark, but you don't want to overuse them. Try using periods, or coordinating conjunctions (but, yet, for, and, etc...) to add variety to your sentences. It was a bit distracting seeing so many semi-colons and did hinder my reading. I almost didn't want to finish the chapter.

Other than that, thanks for the neat read. Oh...I would have liked a discription of the sketch he made...but that's just me...hehe :)

hi again!

i just wanted to point out that your scene where you were saying that he had another demon to deal with, but suddenly he was talking to his sister?
does that mean that his sister is a demon? or she is like a demon? or that he was just comparing her to one?
it doesnt really make a lot of sense.

just wanted to let you know..

haha! this is so cool! i like how it was told in almost like a detective/james bond way in the beginning.

the fight scene was a little rushed, but it was still good.

and the grammar/writing was really good too. and i liked your summary...

:]

All Angels. I knew it. Lots and lots of angels. And Sky's, what, half-Angel? That would be odd, but if you explained it well enough I might buy it. Or maybe he's just favored. Like Samson or something.

:) CD

...So Shelly is a Guardian Angel? Alexiel? the -el is almost always a good indicator of angelic heritage.

:) CD

Raph is the archangel Raphael, of the second tier of seraphim, the Healer. I bet.

Is Shelly bothered by Gluttony?

:) CD