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Reviews For: The Locket
Faith Adeline 2008-02-19 . chapter 1
cute short story, I really enjoyed it :)
Faith
VelvetSea 2008-02-10 . chapter 1
Ah *le sigh* Oh Jared..hehe. (at least, I assume that's who he's based on...forgot to ask you that)

No, it was the crashing and roaring of waves during a storm: all gigantic waves rushing up, grey and dark, foaming- frothing with anger. She’d even go as far to say that the scene was in the middle of a hurricane. Hurricane.

Gorgeous. Just gorgeous, partly cos it's symbolic & partly cos I just love storms. =D
Dreaming Heavens 2008-02-08 . chapter 1
Ah, it's so romantic. The troubled girl meets the playboy that helps her in the end. Only difference is that situations like these never happens in real life, only in the figments of our imaginations. For the moment, that's enough reality for me.
NoieD 2008-02-08 . chapter 1
I'm slightly confused, but I definitely still like this one. Could we get a companion piece?
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