There are a few lines that just got to me.
"Broken lights and skattered dreams"

"nothing is real so dont get upset"

"Beating you with a beating heart"

I look forward to reviewing your other works.
keep it up!

The third stanza was intense and definitely my favorite. What I thought was good in your poem was that it told me a story instead of just being random words thrown together. Good work.

myheartiswaypastbeating