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Seeking Ion 2008-08-12 ch 1,	abuseOh. Ye. Gads. That was amazing! (Dreamy sigh) I love dragon stories. (Pout)(Whine) But the ending was no fair! They hadn't even kissed yet! (Sad face) Oh well, you're the author, you know best. But seriously, that was really, really good.
PencilSketchS 2008-07-30 ch 1,	abuseand so Pace will stay in the valley! Yay! he must be very talented as a knight to be able to beat Ransom. speaking of whom, i totally and utterly adore Ransom. his weakness to flattery, and penchant for eating problematic people. i'm just a bit worried that the princess still has his scale. Look, i really enjoyed the story. i'm off to see some more of ur work now, cause ur stories are fun.
Kari 2008-07-24 ch 1, anon.	abuseRumors? What kind of rumors? I would love to see that explained. And also why Ransom's scale is not growing back. He can't go back to play-fighting if he's got such an obvious, unprotected weakness! D:< Val and her prince seem like very interesting characters, and so does princess Celene, for that matter. She cut off her hair and donned knight armor to go hunt Pace. Will she end up saving a damsel in distress? That's probably a tangent none of us want to go on. I'm going to hunt that song down and learn to sing it. If it's not real, I'll make up a tune, put it on youtube, and send you a link somehow.
nonaccount 2008-07-14 ch 1,	abuseIs there more? Or was that just a tease about a possible Pace pov chapter? If there is more I would really love to read it. Great oneshot, I just wish there was more of it. :)
tmelange1 2008-06-25 ch 1,	abuseI really, really enjoyed this story. I wish there was more of it. So much is still unwritten. Bravo!
Wings937 2008-02-24 ch 1, anon.	abuseThis fic is absolutely adorable. It's so well-written and such a joy to read. I love Ransom . . . His personality is wonderful -- such a narcissist -- and it complements Pace's beautifully. This is a lovely story, and I really hope you write more!
Mr. Sebastian 2008-02-18 ch 1,	abuseSQUEE! THat was so cute and so lovely. The lyrics of the song were hilarious, "the carpenter with his wooden prick"...did you come up with that? I love the unseen tension between Ransom and Pace. Will there be a sequel? With rumors and Val, who is just an awesome character. I loved it. And I just realized how incredibly gushy and mushy and starry I was. Sorry. :)
tsubaki-dono 2008-02-10 ch 1,	abusePretty, pretty! Pace and Ransom are too adorable for words. I like how you drew things out between them, hinting at a past that extended a substantial way back into a present that paced well between them. I find it too funny that Celene spoke of rumours; I'm wishing there was some touch into that later for these two. Surely this can't be the end?! Would really like to see a little more of them in the future, if only just to see them snarl and snap but succumb to each other some more. Surely, by that point, the legand of Sir Pace would have grown to much larger proportions...? Wishing very hard, Tsu
Carrimiento 2008-02-09 ch 1,	abuseThis is a very captivating story, I love it! I am hooked! You have created a wonderful plot and characters. I can't wait until the next chapter. A wonderful story by a wonderful author. Keep up the good work, I enjoy reading all of your stories.

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