Reviews for In The Time Of The West

flea writer 2008-03-22 ch 2,	abusei like this! especially the line, "the once soft wind that carried the stench of rotting horse flesh". I can't wait until your next update to find out if Samuel ends up taking Little Hawk. Oh, and i also liked the tense scene between Samuel and his father, and the reader not knowing it the relationship until the end of the story, it adds suspense, but a great figured out mystery between why he and his father are so distant from each other :)
Grazia D 2008-03-05 ch 2,	abuseI'm loving this! I love the flow and storyline! Cannot wait to read more :)
flea writer 2008-03-01 ch 1,	abusei really like the storyline you are going with. I don't usually like to be too much of a critic, but there are a few minor grammitical mistakes. But they don't take away from the message you are trying to convey. I hope you update soon, because you have left me wondering about Little Hawk... :) much love and God bless
devbneo 2008-02-16 ch 1,	abuseoh my gosh u have to update! ASAP! i love it! Little hawk is so cool, but she needs to not die! ...wow, bad grammer there. update, please!@