That was a really sweet story. I just love stories where the character learns something about themselves or learns an important life lesson (even though that sounds really cheesy).
Even though, I feel it ended too abruptly. I'm glad there will be a sequel.
Great Story!

Until The Sequel,
HBW or Julia E*

To be quite honest with you, this is one of the best stories I've ever read on here. Everyone always writes about the perfect girl- the cheerleader, or the pretty popular girl or the sister of the most popular guy in school- something like that. Rochelle is a totally real character with totally real flaws and I love that. I've always been the 'fat' one too and it's so great to finally read about somebody else who's bigger but isn't characterized as a meaningless blob. Way to go!

SHES LIKE ME! I mean I've even had relatives tell me i'm the preetiest out of my sisters, but I would need to lose weight. This is creepy! I like where this is going so, off to finish and of course if i'm super impressed, which i'm sure i wil be, i'll drop another review!

this story was amazing! Life lessons that everybody should live by where in here! that you have to have confidence in order to enjoy your life and i am so glad that shelly figured it out!!
Also i am SUPER EXCITED about the sequel!
cant wait!!

predictions...hum..i really dont know what is going to happen in the end...it doesnt realy seem like the end is near for me..
but if i had to make a prediciton. I would say that travis and shelly dont end up together but stay really good friends and then she ends up with cody!

travis sends mixed signals and i dont like it!
one minute i think that he really likes shelly and then the next minute he is writing a song for her...it makes me sad that shelly is feeling rejection like this because it sucks!

I love shelly! i think she is awesome and she reminds me of myself! haha
her and travis are so cute! to bad travis has a girlfriend..argg!!

hey. im loving still lovin this story. I love the characters and everything. you write so well. On a couple of sentences though i've noticed you've missed words out, just thought I'd let you know. e.g. "“Where’d you your belt from?” - there should be a get in there i think.
Omg i can't believe its almost finished!

that was a beautiful ending. i cant wait for the sequel! you have to do one...there's too many questions unanswered, though i can guess, and correct me if i'm wrong, that her and cody ended up together and that she joined the softball team and they lived happily ever after. oh and travis is secretly deeply madly in love with her...i'm sticking to this, i dont care what anyone says! :]

That's really beautiful. It was a quick but inspiring read and I loved it! You're writing is really fabulous, and now I'm going to click on your pen-name and read your other stories! :)

Sounds alot like me in High School except i was into country music. lol..

I think it was an excellent ending, and a good thing for all girls big and small to remember. I like how it ended and I wouldn't really want a sequel but if you're going to make one I will probably read it, although I hope she is gonna be with Cody he's a cute character, and she needs a guy like her. Keep up the good work and I hope you're able to finish all your other story's.

~Vermillion

very nicely done. I can totally relate to this, and it's fantastic.

I think this story ended right, perfect ending. It even made tear up. I can't wait for the sequel. I want to know will Travis make a cameo or was he able to book a slot in the sequel?

I think this ended on quite a good note- and I can't wait for the sequel :D good job.