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| babyk2278 2008-10-06 ch 31,  | abuseOMG cousin u are ttly awesome!! love it! |
| M0jojojo 2008-10-06 ch 31, | abuseno. twins! weird! oh but no action between daniel and bri...i miss that! oh and what is up with ciara? i know she's pregnant and all and her life pretty much sucks but bri's right, wassup with the attitude? |
| songlawyer 2008-10-04 ch 31, | abuseIt's coming along really well and I hope she starts to trust him enough to tell him about her horrible past. |
| Silly-girl15 2008-10-03 ch 31, | abusevery good! |
| Gris bray 2008-10-03 ch 31, | abusehehe, babies, huh? awesomeness! |
| ealvidrez 2008-10-03 ch 1, | abuseVery good detail; the opening is very provocative. :} Just for the FYI, though, it's IV not Ivy. I've gotta get through all the chapters now! |
| msallaroundperfect 2008-10-02 ch 31, | abusecrazy... you're just as stupid as you wanna be... |
| babyk2278 2008-09-26 ch 30, | abusethat was bull crap...naw jk loseer it was goddie i like how u put that name david in there (insider) luv ya toodles |
| LoneWolf-234 2008-09-21 ch 30, | abuseawsomefullness! lol need more!! |
| bbyxhann 2008-09-20 ch 30, | abuseOMG ! wow , just when things settle down nd start goin good .. bad things happen .. -_- you know i just realized , that does happen alott . like when he apologizes after the burger king thing [heh , that rhymed >. |
| msallaroundperfect 2008-09-19 ch 30, | abuseoh that really lovely... oh when you get this bring me that damn book |
| M0jojojo 2008-09-19 ch 30, | abuseoh my GOD! what a mess! dot tell me david forte is bad! no... but they r so cute! i luv john! oh btw im confused, who is kameron? |
| Miss perky 2008-09-19 ch 30, | abuseOmg!I can't believe that Daniel's older brother is the one who got Ciara pregnant!I can not wait for the next chapter!! |
| Gris bray 2008-09-19 ch 30, | abusehi! omg! u wont believe me! my name is cynthia, the ringtone of phone is 'touch my body'. i love starbucks, and my fav too is caramel latte. i have a black car. and i have a friend who i call by the name ally. when i started reading this story, it freaked the living shit out of me. hehe~~ so many similar stuff. lol anyways!! i like the story, its awesome. cant wait to know wat will happen in the next chap! gud luck! :D |
| M0jojojo 2008-09-17 ch 29, | abusewhat? WHAT??! U BETTER HAVE A PERFECTLY GOOD DAMN EXCUSE FOR NOT FINISHING THIS ABSOLUTELY RIVETING STORY! uh...oops? i meant to say i liked ur story a whole lot, and i was quite surprised when it ended, as i could go on and on reading chapter after chapter after chapter after...okay okay u get the idea:P plz update quickly! my friends would tell u i'm the last person to say this (writers block people!) but i really need 2 kw the end of this! for my sanity! (though u probably think i dont have much of that after this review:P) cheers! Mojo |