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| Basara 2008-02-12 ch 1,  | abusetoo much fleeting... to notice one's situation on the reality... nice... |
| Faith Adeline 2008-02-09 ch 1, | abusesimple, but amazing. wonderful job. Faith |
| Julius Gillian 2008-02-09 ch 1, | abuseHmm, having just read your other recently posted haiku, this one is only a shadow compared with it. The meaning is eagerly given away, and I feel the message is way too typical, though I don't only find pleasure in the complex and profound. Average, I guess. Keep posting however, I love your work. |
| Moon's Poetess 2008-02-09 ch 1, | abuseI like how the title fits in with what's you're talking about - random, I know. But I read the poem before really looking at the title, and I was thinking in a completely metaphorical sense XD, thinking "in a tough situation", then I see the title and it all fits in... yeah, nice work =) Moon's Poetess P.S. Just flicked over your profile. My fave Relient K line was always, "Because all of us are all too stuck strapped to a chair watching our lives blow up, stuck watching our lives blow up." - such an awesome band. |