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| dEaTH.tO.sURgErY 2008-02-24 ch 1, | abusethis one is by far my favorite. i LOVE it! but it's so sad... very well written. |
| Lolo12 2008-02-09 ch 1, | abuseThis is a nice little poem. The only thing is that the rhyming at the beginning felt a little forced, and then rest of it felt a little more free flowing... |