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| simpleplan13 2008-02-09 ch 1,  | abuseTHe hope of lightness.. the It FREAKING GONE!.. it's I like the beginning, but the last line didn't seem as well written as the rest of the piece... and I wasnt really sure what the it referred to.. other than that nice piece...I like te idea of the flare of your soul and heart |