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boys kiss girls
2008-03-08
ch 1,
abuseI really love how this flowed. I love the vocabulary you used, as well. Parts of it remind me of the rhyme about Guy Fawkes:

"Remember, remember, the 5th of November
The Gunpowder Treason and plot ;
I know of no reason why Gunpowder Treason
Should ever be forgot..."

I love the God and Hamlet references, as well. The whole piece is tragic in a very eloquent and hopeful way.
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