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| boys kiss girls 2008-03-08 ch 1, | abuseI really love how this flowed. I love the vocabulary you used, as well. Parts of it remind me of the rhyme about Guy Fawkes: "Remember, remember, the 5th of November The Gunpowder Treason and plot ; I know of no reason why Gunpowder Treason Should ever be forgot..." I love the God and Hamlet references, as well. The whole piece is tragic in a very eloquent and hopeful way. |