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| Take the Money and Run 2008-04-20 ch 1,  | abuseThis is really strong in its simplicity. The flow is really good, my favorite lines are the first two. I think "hear" is supposed to be "heart," there's a typo. Courtesy of the review marathon. |
| Kenna-Kat11 2008-02-17 ch 1, | abuseouch that hurt...but it was lovely ~E~ |
| iheartcarebears 2008-02-16 ch 1, | abusethat was a nice poem :) |
| fatbird33 2008-02-09 ch 1, | abusegood but there is a typo in the seventh stanza. instead of heart, you wrote hear. |
| BarbedBlueRoses 2008-02-09 ch 1, | abusemy hear, don’t (I think you meant heart?) Other than that I think it's good. |