I think that you need to fix your formatting, because a lot people won't want to read it like this.

*New Reader*

Lovely story you've got going here. I'm looking forward to your next chapter. I just read all of your 4 chapters you've got up and by the way you almost spelled my own name in chapter 3. You've got nearly 5/6 of my name right. My name is Erickah and yes I know funny I have an 'h' but it's unique in its own little way. Oh if you end up being curious I'm totally not like what people say because the meaning of my name. Looking forward to your next chapter. :)

I really like this story so far! Keep up the good work!

I really like it. I especially like the whole Mona Lisa thing I seriously busted out laughing at that part.;) I despise her parents they are so evil. I love her grandfather though, he's my favorite adult character right now. Please update soon.

lovely samurai