Hey!

I really like his sstory so far, especially Abel and i love Jarets name, very immaginative. I really hope that you post the next one soon cause Im dying to see what happens.

Please update soon!!

Thanks!

Oh man this is good! The political subterfuge is getting intense! I didn't catch any grammar or plot mishaps, so good work at that!

I can't wait for Abel and Jaret to get their act back together...but I really think Jaret should get on his knees and beg, since it really is his fault for the most part that Abel won't meet with him physically! Lol, I'm so cruel to Jaret >.<

Awesome work!

thanks for another update.
i'm really looking forward how things will go on from here.

O, the plot thickens. I'm excited to see what happens next; just wanted to review since this story certainly deserves a lot of reviews. Great work!
-Diamondking

I WANT MORE!

You're not doing anything "wrong", it's just taking a bit long to get to the good parts, that's all. I suggest make-out scenes!!

awn...heart-wrenching. poor abel...
now I'm mad at Jaret :(

SO HOT!

Yayy! There is a plot to this, not like the other slash stories where there's only sex. Gud job :)

I have to say, I really do love your writing. Again, I find myself falling in love with the world that you've created and the characters are so real...if I weren't in a library right now, I'd probably be crying at this point. Honestly, you should have tons more reviews; this is an excellent work of art.

-Diamondking

I simply love this story for a number of reasons, but primarily for the world that you create and the characters that inhabit it. I wish I could do the same with my work, but until then I'll simply enjoy reading YOUR work, hehe. I didn't want to continue reading without at least reviewing!

-Diamondking

Very good work! As much as I like Jaret, hearing Abel yell at him was refreshing, especially when he told Jaret of his knowledge about his supposed 'love' sleeping with another noble.

Love it again, and keep up the great work!

That's fine!

Post moar! Edit a little bit later!

Cheers and keep it up :D

Really well-thought out story. I like the depth of the plot-line and how you devlope the characters, it's really striking. Believable dialogue too. Good job.

Excellent work! I love all the subterfuge and political dialogue you have going on here, plus the brief interaction between Jaret and Abel's Shadowlig was nice as well. I'm excited for when all this comes to a head and when Abel comes out of his sleep!

Keep up the great job!