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| bleeding black and white 2008-03-14 ch 1,  | abusethis is really cool. i know the format isn't how you wanted it but it looks good anyways. the latin is really unique. good job |
| simpleplan13 2008-02-10 ch 1, | abuseI didn't see a translation for deliciolae... maybe i missed it With the fp format... try putting - wherever you want a space that usually works The idea of latin and english put together is really interesting... I like the piece... and I think it shaped as a heart would also be really awesome... there was line I didnt like will die young as out friendships (when you translate amities) as out friend ships seems like a very odd phrase... Other than that I really loved the piece.. it was well written and a good combination of sweet and sad |
| Novelist 2008-02-09 ch 1, | abuse:) I love it, the Latin really adds a unique touch |