 Lily Llynn 2008-04-02 . chapter 1Interesting. The pebble idea was cute, how he made her wait because he was busy was cute, and this oneshot was just cute in general. (: The writing was awesome, the characters too (oh, Diana. Sounds like my friends and I, haha), and I like how the ending is kinda open-ended, leaving the reader to decide what's happened. I also like how this wasn't super fluffy. (:
Awesome oneshot, and a spiffy addition to our c2 from woodstock1969! (: |