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| Lily Llynn 2008-04-02 ch 1,  | abuseInteresting. The pebble idea was cute, how he made her wait because he was busy was cute, and this oneshot was just cute in general. (: The writing was awesome, the characters too (oh, Diana. Sounds like my friends and I, haha), and I like how the ending is kinda open-ended, leaving the reader to decide what's happened. I also like how this wasn't super fluffy. (: Awesome oneshot, and a spiffy addition to our c2 from woodstock1969! (: |
| Pinkamoo 2008-02-15 ch 1, | abuse-gasp- You CANNOT just end it there. Gees, no kisses? You're awful, really. But I like your story anyway. |
| NoOneInThisWorld 2008-02-12 ch 1, | abuseaw i wanted to know if they actually get to together. good story |
| woodstock1969 2008-02-09 ch 1, | abuseOh-ho! Is "Vincent" a real person? If he's actually dropping such huge hints, chances are that he likes you. Go get him, girl! |