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the.next.day.i.hate.them.
2008-02-10
ch 1,
abuseyeah..when i first heard the voices arguing (usually about my suicide) i freaked out and started cutting on myself, but when the doctors gave me medicine for it i cried that they had stolen a part of me. good job on the poem. i loved it; especially the verses about peals of red and pain shooting from your skin. very nice imagery.
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