m taco chips... kinda like pringles pizza chips-yum
Hm, what a coincidence yum like pizza chips and a yummy story
Ok I shall stop with the puns. But seriously I liked this. This has to be at least the third time I've read it. I have no idea why I review stuff I read several times over. Oh well... I liked it!

Hey, it's me..."Arnold's Love" from ...yah...so I read this a million years ago but didn't want to review until I had an account. I have one now and think in the next few days I shall publish a chappie to a story I'm writing...please read...now about yours...it freakin' made me laugh the whole time! I just love your humor and your hilarious liners!! The ending...absolutely wonderful!! You are so amazing!! amazing!! AMAZING!! When you become famous will you write about me in your memoirs?

Aww... that's cute. But that was bounf to happen anyway. Hehehe.

This is a great simple storyline that you could always elaborate on later. Nice job. Never stop using that creative imagination you have.

yours truly,

-Jae-

A little short for my taste, but it's cute and the title's awesome. (: Love the little game they played and even though the random confession at the end kinda popped out of nowhere, I loved that too. (: I always love fluff, and thankfully, woodstock1969 does too because she added this to our c2. (:

Cute and spontaneous. I love it. :)

AW SO CUTE SO CUTE SO CUTE


anyway, some real feedback. i like its simplicity and lightheartedness. made me smile, ya know?

well written and just, a nice one shot.

Oh! Cute! I love how you wrote a whole story about some taco-flavored chips :P! Innovative much? ;D
Sarah :) x
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I want your taco chips!
Grr.
Good story!

omgg this was so cute!! loved it =)

Ah!! That was hilarious and cute all at the same time!

Way to go, PointyO... Hey, look, I'm a poet and I didn't even realize it. (hehe...)

hahaha aw that's really cute, but maybe she should say something back? sorta leaves it hanging like that, but still very good :]]

Cute ^_^
-Aria

I did enjoy! I LOVE taco-flavored chips, especially with guac. m... Bad cravings...

Okay, back to the story -- I love it. Chase and Alex are too cute :) Their exchanges/relationship is totally believable.

Short yet sweet. Good work!

Now for some taco chips...

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