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cokiesandiequalsluv4ever 2008-08-06 ch 33,	abuseum..could you please continue because i don't know if it's only my opinion or that of others but i can truly say that the story rocks and i can't wait for the next chapter...damn cliffie...:((
Twilight Starr 2008-08-04 ch 33,	abuse"Tree Nymph's" should be "Tree Nymphs". If you put the apostophe in you're either saying the Tree Nymph own will fight or that the Tree Nymph is will fight. "Unicorn's shall fight" should be "Unicorns shall fight". "Water Nymph's will" should be "Water Nymphs will". "Land Nymph's will"--"Land Nymphs will". "Centaur's will"--"Centaurs will". "Phoenix's will"--"Phoenixes will". "Griffin's will"--"Griffins will". "Stargazer's will"--"Stargazers will". Nice addition. Keep writing! ~Twilight Starr~
Twilight Starr 2008-08-04 ch 32,	abuse"bi-polar" should be "bipolar". "My names Dezian" should be "My name's Dezian". Interesting chapter. Dezian sounds like a character for him to get jealous over. Nice work. ~Twilight Starr~
Twilight Starr 2008-08-04 ch 31,	abuseNightwalker's jealousy is funny. Tiarna sounds like she's fun. Nice work. ~Twilight Starr~
Twilight Starr 2008-08-03 ch 30,	abuseHis declaration of love was cute. ^^ I like the mystery. Nice work. ~Twilight Starr~
A-Starr1691 2008-08-03 ch 33,	abuseOMG i love this story i started at 8 pm and now it 5am! I couldn't stop reading this! I'm like on the edge here I can't WAIT to find out what gonna happen with the war and Seraphina an Aeron's relationship! Keep at it!
JustAnotherLibroLover 2008-08-01 ch 33,	abuseGod Damn you're good- no, you're FREAKIN' GREAT AND AWESOME AND JUST AW! I loved this chapter's ending! Sure it was a bit of a cliffe, but it didn't scare me, as so many cliff hangers do, it just left me wondering what's gonna happen next. Just thought you might want to know, I started this story at around eleven thirty and read straight until now. It is four forty-five. Appreciate the hours of sleep I sacrificed! Hee hee, just kidding because it wasn't really a sacrifice! I kept telling myself, "Okay, I'll stop at the end of this chapter" but what do I do? I keep on clickin' that "next chapter" button over and over again like a FictionPress Junkie! I swear, this story is dang addicting, in fact, it is one of the best I've read... and I have only said that about five stories so far. Also, I wanted to say that I love your story 'cause it isn't riddled with spelling and grammar errors (yes there are a few, but no one's perfect... after all, isn't that what editors are for? :P Hee hee!) and you don't interrupt the reader in the middle of the story with pointless author's notes. Your care is acknowledged and much appreciated! I can't wait until your next update (well I guess I can, but why would you be so cruel ? :) ... ) and hope the next chapter is posted soon! Until then, jasta la vista baby
MamiPapi 2008-07-29 ch 33,	abuseAMAZING! Love how the story has been going so far. wonder what its gonna take to get Aeron to talk to her about the proposal again.
AfterTheRainIsGone 2008-07-28 ch 33,	abuseOmg. So much to take in!! Aeron is mad at Sera, and then to top it off, ALL the fairy creatures have come to give their support. I think that I'm as exhausted as Sera at this point!! Amazing chapter!! I had to catch up a bit because I didn't know that you had updated so much!! Can't wait to see what happens next! (This is former anonymous reviewer Gabby by the way) =)
Katherine-the-greate 2008-07-26 ch 33,	abusei loved reading this chapter. meeting everyone was fun, but it went by very fast. i like the dragon a lot too. the fire belly thing was great. i hate you leaving off at this cliffhanger. so- UPDATE NOW!
Katherine-the-greate 2008-07-26 ch 32,	abusei love sabre. i like the other guard too. Please let sera get back together with him soon. =] i really like meeting the guard and her working out with the people. i can't wait to meet the new creatures.
Katherine-the-greate 2008-07-26 ch 31,	abuseyay. swinging like a monkey. i hope she makes up with aeron next chapter. =]
Katherine-the-greate 2008-07-26 ch 30,	abuseanother wonderful chapter. i like how this is going and the new warriors. i can;t wait to see her answer.
naokoangel01 2008-07-25 ch 33,	abuseOhh my gosh this is like one of the coolest chapter all of the magical creatures I loved! It was very well detailed about each of them and it was funny too I like the funny And ohh the cliffhanger that was a evil one, but it only makes me love this story even more Please update soo I cant wait ! :D
RandiRose 2008-07-25 ch 33,	abuseWohoo! I knew it! I knew it was a dragon! Yay! That's the next biggest thing to a plane...well, planes are smaller, but from the ground they look the same. Frickin' awesome chapter! Can't wait for the next one!

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