Yay! Things make sense now. Will read on. :)

YAAAAAAAAAAAY honestly i thought the story was amazing before the edit. everytime i read it, it never fails to make me smile and squeal at the cute bits and i love it ! :)
YAY FOR UPDATES :D
(ive finally started my new story haha and hopefully i can learn the art of updating regularly T-T )

Who is Sabre (I can guess that he was the half-dead dog from chap 16) and Ditreenos (no clue)? I feel like chapters, gaps from the story are missing. I saw reviews for 45 chapters but there are only 38 chapters here. Did you maybe upload the full story incorrectly? I tried to read on ahead but something felt wrong, like I was missing something. All of the sudden, in this chapter, Sera readily admitted her love for Aeron (quote: But I love him and he loves me," I pronounced proudly, smiling) when last chapter you wrote that she was still unsure of her feelings. I've actually read the old version and I think I like the edit better but I really want to read this version in full.

Please fix.
-InspiredVisionary (too lazy to sign in)

Agh. She's almost 21. Why is she acting like a damn 12 year old. More than mildly annoying.

While the beginning seemed a bit dragged and Seraphina's character immature and annoying, this story's developed GREATLY. I loved the involvement of magic and Sera's powers, with the just good enough blend of romance. Nightwalker was probably my favorite character, haha. Overall, really good job despite the weak startoff.

Quick question! When he was carrying her bridal style earlier, and he touched her face, where did his third arm come from? In my mind he would have had to drop her legs or something to be able to wipe tears away... Sorry, I Read these things like I am watching a movie and it just is not making sense right there. I love the story and the plot though. And just for future reference: Allah and God are the same, just one is in a different language, but it still means The I Am.

Whoa! This story is so dang good and amazing! Great job in writing it brilliantly (though I was hoping for more Sera and Aeron romance /3). Yeah, and the plot was undeniably awesome. I love the fantasy feel to it. Definitely one of my favorite stories. You rock, dude! :D

God Bless and keep it up! Looking forward to His Captive! :

OrangeKiss

I don't understand why this story's so popular. Its so cliche, the characters are so stereotypical. Sera's whole "depression" is so fucking stupid. She wasn't even Tristan's girlfriend, and why the hell was she so convinced she loved him when they barely talked? You could've given some more backround on him. And all this slut-shaming, good lord! I suggest you look it up if you don't know what that means. At the scene where Aeron kisses her for the first time she says when did I become such a SLUT, just cause she wants to kiss someone? Wtf.

Awesome story!

GYAH! This is an absolutely positively amazing story!

XD

I love it! I do wish there had been a bit more development with Helios, because that would have made his death hit home a bit more. But other than that, this story is PERFECT!

oh i love aussie slang, theres something really shivery when an australian person speaks slang, i love watching prison break too.

I absolutely love this! I couldn't stop reading, it seriously pissed my mum off but oh well, it was just soooooooo good!

I absolutely loved this story and I can't wait to read His Captive! You're story was so good and it was realistic, if that makes any sense! :D

love love love so far!

*dies*

*comes back to life*

*dies*

WOW.

HELIOS! :(

*dies again*

Look what you've done to me! I blame you for all your extremely fantastic writing!