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| simpleplan13 2008-02-12 ch 1,  | abuseI like the repetition and it's definitely easy to relate to... the rhyming is great as well |
| WriterXO 2008-02-10 ch 1, | abuseInteresting. I wouldn't change anything about this poem. It's perfect as it is. I really like it!! Keep writing!! |
| purple x pen 2008-02-10 ch 1, | abusehaha i like this, i can relate a lot, nice one =] |