ok, so here is my view...
this is great. absolutely great.
Just the was it's explained is so...unique.
And, I love the part at the beginning...about the chewing gum and such...awesome
it's...9:30 on a school night so I must go and can no longer keep reviewing your stories :(
I promise to continue soon. :D
great job!

Second comment for a great story.
It's got something real, I think. Something I can not say makes the story a real story. There is no big fiction and so it's easier for me to feel with the figures, the persons, with you maybe. With her. I also like how you put the lyrics in your story. It really goes with it and fit in.
I like the way you write.
So, well done!
I'll keep on reading ;)
Bye *^.^*

this was very well written. i like how you quoted evanescence throughout the story. it really fit.