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| Kjersti 2008-06-04 ch 4, anon. | abuseJust one word: Aw! :) Oh, and you write really well. I loved this. |
| commitmentphobe 2008-05-03 ch 4,  | abuseawesome! >.< I love it when people write stories like this, where it turns out this guy everyone thinks is a huge badass delinquent ISN'T, and he's not some stupid bad-boy either, he's just bad with people. And I can totally relate with the whole secretly loving chick flicks thing. Not all of 'em, but She's the Man is my favorite movie ever. And my entire family thinks I'm this cynical, cold hearted romance killer. I have a reputation to maintain... it's a good thing they don't read my favorite list, or my cover would be blown. :P |
| Cecilyatheart 2008-04-22 ch 4, | abuseI like this story. The pancake part was so hilarious! |
| d666lisa 2008-04-20 ch 4, | abuseExcellent story, I love short ones :) |
| fluteloop 2008-04-08 ch 4, | abuseAh...(girlish sqweak)...I loved it! I really like your style, I think I put this in my favorites! And then go read some more of your stuff...well, nice job on a work well written, and as always: WRITE ON! |
| fluteloop 2008-04-08 ch 3, | abuseNot too short at all! This chapter had me smiling through the entire thing! I wonder what Natilie will do now? Well, off to chapter 4! |
| fluteloop 2008-04-08 ch 2, | abuseIm glad Hunter decided to join! I've always loved ska! Whoo...go reel big fish! They rock! Cant wait to read the next chapter, so I think I'll do it now... |
| fluteloop 2008-04-08 ch 1, | abuseIt's wonderful! I know it's already all the way posted, but I can't wait to find out what happens next! You have a really great style, I like it! Well...off to read chapter two! |
| starlit x sky 2008-03-26 ch 4, | abuseGreat story! |
| Vampire Kitsune 2008-03-22 ch 4, | abuseGreat story- I like how it developed. |
| Essevera 2008-03-21 ch 4, | abuseNice short story :) |
| moshpitqueen017 2008-03-21 ch 4, | abuseAH. that made me so damn giddy. haha. i have the same weakness for guy drummers. xD great great story. srsly. ska's a great genre, btw. |
| svmgeleta 2008-03-21 ch 2, | abuseaw! so cute! |
| Pinkamoo 2008-03-20 ch 4, | abuseHaha, so cute! Kisses. They're always good. Good job with your story! |
| TCATH57 2008-03-20 ch 4, | abuseNO you ended it *sob* your so mean i would hate you if you didn't write so good. Back to chapters earlier i liked how she climbed over the balcony and the comments she made it almost sounds a lot like me when i get my usual 5 hrs. of sleep. (i'm off today i sleep 13 - 14 hrs.) I think since your story is so awesome you should do a bit more about like school and what all Nat's friends think about her and Hunter and even some steriotype drama like another guy likes her or another girl likes Hunter something like that would be fine too. You just have to keep going! |