 flying drumsticks 2008-04-26 . chapter 6I'm so glad you updated! This story is awesome, and I can't wait to see what happens next! Nice job on this chapter.
"I wondered vaguely what the mom who made the triangle sandwiches was thinking."
That made me laugh. |
 WriterGurl123 2008-04-26 . chapter 6I love Ska, the type of music is just so fun to listen to when you're bored or in a bad mood, you just listen to it and it makes your day. It reminds me of the 90's and I get all nostalgic, but anyways, back to the story.
I'm glad that Joe didn't pressure her to do anything, because then I would have lost all my respect for him. I think that Thomas likes her as more than a friend and is jealous of Joe, but I could be wrong.
Post More Soon! |
 flying drumsticks 2008-02-23 . chapter 5I like this chapter! Reading this story makes me wish it was summer though... Anyway, I can't wait to read about the concert! Update soon! |
 flying drumsticks 2008-02-19 . chapter 3Interesting chapter. I think I smell a fight over Lauren coming.
And by the way, you have an awesome pen name ;) |
 WriterGurl123 2008-02-18 . chapter 5I hope she has a fun time, but I also hope her mom doesn't catch her in the act. |
 flying drumsticks 2008-02-17 . chapter 1Great first chapter! I'm looking forward to reading the rest of this. |
 poetxoxgurl 2008-02-17 . chapter 5really good keep writing!! |
 WriterGurl123 2008-02-10 . chapter 4Very interesting! Maybe he is into drugs. |
 Princess Narcotic 2008-02-10 . chapter 4Wow, I really liked this. It was really professionally written, like a real teenfic that you buy in stores! It was very realistically done, you could actually hear Lauren's voice in your head, and there isn't anything out of line with it at all. Well done! 10/10 |