Reviews for My Mortifying Addiction

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deny.me.not 2008-07-03 ch 9,	abuseAhaha, she walked into a guy and made his nose bleed. That's funny, and MTG is pretty cute so far. =] I look forward to the next chapter. -dmn.
followureshadow 2008-06-25 ch 1,	abuseokay, usually im the type who would review on a story very simply: "good job, keep it going" but this chapter alone has REALLY caught my interest. i havent even read farther..but i want to. which means one thing for you! job accomplished, right? haha, anyways, yes great characters. i love the beginning already!
Zonne 2008-06-25 ch 9,	abuseI finally got back to this, had to re-read a lot to remember it all. I still enjoy the sarcastic Odette. I like MTG too, he's pretty cool. Interesting how they keep "running into" each other. The eco runners was a cute touch. Wonder what Gabe did? I know Odette needs depth, but I am a bit concerned about her getting to angsty with the parents thing. Also, the age diff between her and Reilly really threw me. Didn't think they were so far apart. Anyway, keep on writing. It's a good story and worth reading. And I know what you mean about reviews - they are so encouraging.
Kohlomere 2008-06-25 ch 9,	abuseHey if I was named Harisson, I would be pretty happy that my supposed namesake was holding up so well in his "old" age. I kid. Dale is hysterical! Great work, E.
FireFallon 2008-06-24 ch 9,	abuseHarrison :) awesome name...who cares if his last name isn't ford... you better not stop writing or else i might cry if i don't find out what happens and you definitely need to save the world from my crying face, because trust me it isn't pretty :P so update soon! (like in five minutes? too soon?)
deny.me.not 2008-06-14 ch 8,	abuseHaha, this is CUTE, honestly Odette is odd and amusing, I love it. Her antics made me smile. =] I wonder about Gabe and the police though, it's kind of worrying, haha. I vote for movie theater guy! =D Update soon. -dmn.
LethargicLove 2008-06-11 ch 8,	abuseOh, man. I actually burst into hysterical laughter when I read the "football in the fridge" comment and Odette's reasoning behind it. We finally get to see Movie Theatre Guy again! This is so exciting, haha.
Kohlomere 2008-06-11 ch 8,	abuseEnvironmentalism in action! That's terrific! But am I tripping or something--none of the characters' names sound familiar. I'm probably tripping from my nap. Don't mind me. Great work, E.
Georgianna 2008-06-11 ch 8,	abuseTHIS IS SO FUNNY AND UNIQUE!
it's julia 2008-05-28 ch 7,	abuseOdette's last line was perfect. I couldn't help but laugh. The relationship between Odette and Gabe seems to have moved a bit too quickly, in my opinion, but I still love reading about their interaction. I love the characterization. Can't wait for more.
Kohlomere 2008-05-28 ch 7,	abuseOy...funny not so much but very profound. I love it! Great work, E.
Emakoke 2008-05-27 ch 6,	abuseHas this chapter been edited? I had a quick scan through the old version and couldn't much difference. Anyway, I have to go now but I will read chapter 8 soon!
Emakoke 2008-05-27 ch 5,	abuseThere isn't much different in this chapter...as I recall I didn't write that much on this one in my glorious green font! All I'd say is that once or twice you still have that problem with the full stops after speech when there should be a comma. Think about the speech being in the same sentence as the "he/she" said...if that helps! Anyway, another good chapter.
Emakoke 2008-05-27 ch 4,	abuseIt's good that you got rid of the bit where Gabe and Odette introduce themselves to each other...but you also got rid of the wellies bit! I liked the wellies bit. It made the scene really awkward. But then, maybe you don't want it to be awkward. I don't know, it's up to you. =P I like the bit you added at the end. It makes you want to go to the next chapter to see what happens.
Emakoke 2008-05-27 ch 3,	abuseHey, I thought I'd finish reading all the old chapters before I started on 8. You added quite a bit to this one! It's all good. I loved the whole Morrigan bit. Morrigan's moccasin does sound fantastic, I'll give you that. But the best thing is that I feel like I know so much more about Odette now. It's all padded out. Anyway...nothing else to say!

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