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| yummyjello 2008-05-12 ch 1,  | abuseI think you took my thoughts, bottled them, and put them nearly word for word in the italicized verse. :) Anyway this is amazingly written. I love the honesty in your descriptions of memories. |
| a silenced revolution 2008-02-29 ch 1, | abuseIn a way, it seems innocent, but there's wisdom in the perspective expressed. I like how honest and kind of sweet it is without being sappy. Lovely piece. |
| about.us. 2008-02-10 ch 1, | abuseI love this! Your title is really cute too! I like how you italized your thoughts and how you chose to break down each line. Very nice poem |