"There was no push just the fall"
Really? Did you really just lose Biblical imagery there? That's a rarity for you, sweetie. But an interesting inclusion here. Are you familiar with Mark Twain's sentiment that no one has ever prayed for the one sinner who really needed it? Or maybe the one dreamer whose ideas were just too big...

Interesting use of emphasis, rhyme, and capitalization, and poignant subject matter as usual. In this Internet Age, the world has become no bigger or more mysterious than your back yard 200 years ago. What frontier is left? What privacy can we expect? With things like Wikipedia and Facebook, the anonymous have been brought out of the shadows. Thanks for making me think. Give me a call sometime. =)

Clever

ah this is freaky cuz you sound like a **-off black rapper

2 words

Loved.it

Gosh I hope you keep on writing this poem really was inspiring...

see you've got me rhyming already :D

Sincerely,
The Sleep Of Reason