Great piece. I loved the sentiment behind it. It has a great title and it flowed well. It reminded me of a song. It's got to be one of my favorites of yours. Nice work.

Have an excellent summer and an amazing day.

~Twilight Starr~

very sweet

This is so very sweet. I hope your friends love this b/c I know I do. Nice job

Kristie Marie

Great as always! Your rhyming is also good, and your setup with the sentences makes it easy to read and appreciate!
I like the words you use to describe your emotions! Keep it up!
The Reverse Edge Blade

i love you!
amazing.

How sweet. The rhyming seemed like a little too much in places, but not terrible. Nice work.