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| Twilight Starr 2008-06-23 ch 1, | abuseGreat piece. I loved the sentiment behind it. It has a great title and it flowed well. It reminded me of a song. It's got to be one of my favorites of yours. Nice work. Have an excellent summer and an amazing day. ~Twilight Starr~ |
| fatbird33 2008-02-22 ch 1, | abusevery sweet |
| XxXKristie marieXxX 2008-02-11 ch 1, | abuseThis is so very sweet. I hope your friends love this b/c I know I do. Nice job Kristie Marie |
| The Reverse Edge Blade 2008-02-11 ch 1, | abuseGreat as always! Your rhyming is also good, and your setup with the sentences makes it easy to read and appreciate! I like the words you use to describe your emotions! Keep it up! The Reverse Edge Blade |
| melbell 2008-02-10 ch 1, | abusei love you! amazing. |
| perpetual questions 2008-02-10 ch 1, | abuseHow sweet. The rhyming seemed like a little too much in places, but not terrible. Nice work. |