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| empathic life 2008-07-14 ch 1,  | abuseI hope you like reviews. ^^ Wow. Just... wow. This piece was so incredibly... emotional. I loved it. I'm curious as to whether the presentation in paragraph was intentional. I'll assume it was, in which case I commend you. Although it did make the reading a bit difficult (I kept losing my spot >. |