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| xxBreakingDawnxx 2008-08-19 ch 1,  | abuseI feel a lot of hidden meaning to this poem, great work |
| Ygg 2008-02-16 ch 1, | abuseI don't quite like the last line.. It kind of breaks the internal rhythm of the first two lines, and adds nothing really new (because it could already be guessed that it's no rain). I think a Haiku should not explain everything and leave like 90% to the reader. But that's only my opinion of course :) Keep writing! |
| WildRoseThorn 2008-02-10 ch 1, | abuseu know its kinda funny that ur username is so happy and ur poems r so sad |