Great story! You're really talented at writing! Please update soon!

OMG. I LOVE THIS STORYY! Natalia is awesome... like so awesome i wish i was her! lawl, can her cousin maliki and her lioness friend appear more? i think the are definately intresting characters! hehe, and i cant help but think that the wolf pup is gonna mean something later on in the story... am i right? :D

Hope you don't find corrections annoying. Because I found a few 'What about I, Dominic?' (should be what about me),'would have referred him not to say it' (preferred). This is realy good so far!