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Reviews For: Night Sky

openheadspace
2008-02-10
ch 1,
abuseAmazing. I love 'velvet blue sky'. Perfect metaphor. :)
Jamir420
2008-02-10
ch 1,
abuseLove the content. Try using less words, like "and" though. Sometimes it can make your sentences sound too complicated, which can offset the tone, a undesirable result in poetry.
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