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| she smolders 2008-02-19 ch 1,  | abuseWillow trees always will have a special place in my heart because I can remember an afternoon that I spent lying under one with someone who meant a lot to me back then. I love the wistful feeling in the last few lines. Take care. |
| In the Rye 2008-02-10 ch 1, | abusesounds like you just threw in all the exotic words without using them properly. but otherwise i liked it. it had a lonely feel to it. |