Reviews for you know the moon is fading

RogueRobin 2008-03-31 ch 1,	What happened to her friend?
simpleplan13 2008-02-14 ch 1,	I LOVE the line "you light candles with your eyes" the perseids were streaking the sky... interesting word that I had to look up and discovered it should have a capital P unless you knew that and chose not to do it.. lol I really like the alliteration in the first line of the second stanza the ending stanza is really powerful and beautiful Awesome piece
Laura Elizabeth 2008-02-11 ch 1,	I absolutely loved the flow to this poem. It sounds wonderful when spoken out loud (I did this at work =D) The imagery is fantastic. The only line I was a little iffy about was the one with the semi colon, but it makes more sense the more I read that line. So no worries, I think it was just me haha. By the way, your first stanza is brilliant. Loved it. Going in my favorites! -Laura