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| QuietLikeNinja 2008-05-11 ch 16,  | abuseThis seems to be Ivy's greatest challenge. I hope they catch up to Amala and give her what she deserves. Amala is doing better than I thought she would. Hopefully Ivy turns out to be okay too. Once again I enjoyed the fight scenes. :) |
| QuietLikeNinja 2008-05-11 ch 15, | abuseYou see quite a dark side of Ivy in this chapter. Could Silver have been worse? I wonder if Ivy will ever want to retire. The fights didn't disappoint either. :) I would not want to be Amala right now. |
| QuietLikeNinja 2008-05-10 ch 14, | abuseI think Amala's finally getting an idea of who she has been messing with. I don't think her encounter with Ivy is going as planned. I think your fight scenes were good too. :) Seems Silver was having a little trouble with Rask lol. Though he still knows how to handle a knife. Looking forward to the ending. :) |
| QuietLikeNinja 2008-05-09 ch 13, | abuseMight change this chapter as well huh? *sighs* Do any of the stalkers know about Silver's past? Well it seems things are going to get quite nasty at the end with Silver and his stalkers all working together. I can't wait. :) |
| QuietLikeNinja 2008-05-07 ch 10, | abuseNice to see Ivy loosen up a bit lol. Very interesting about Silver. I would like to know more about his past too. Wonder what Amala has up her sleeve? *waits anxiously for the next chapter* :) |
| QuietLikeNinja 2008-05-06 ch 9, | abuseIvy seems like she is enjoying herself very much. The halberd was a nice touch. :) I don't think Amala really knows who she is dealing with. I'm anxious to see what the next test will be. |
| QuietLikeNinja 2008-05-04 ch 6, | abuseWow 3 chapters in one night! :) I know that must have been hard for Ivy to control herself. I am wondering how Amala found out about Ivy and what she is going to do when Ivy finds her. I can't wait to find out. |
| QuietLikeNinja 2008-04-14 ch 3, | abuseIvy seems to have a lot of anger inside lol. Can't wait to find out what happens to Zachary. Is it too much to ask for a quicker update? :) |
| QuietLikeNinja 2008-03-04 ch 2, | abuseTxs for updating! :) Interesting so far. Very good descriptions. I will never get enough of Ivy and Silver going at it. :D |
| QuietLikeNinja 2008-02-26 ch 1, | abuseExcellent Start! I can't wait for the rest. I hope there will be several more to this series. :) |
| Cue the Starlight 2008-02-25 ch 1, | abuseMore please. :D Zachary (I'm assuming) needs to give us all a dose of his Shadow Stalkery pimpedness. But I disagree...there are friends in every game. Sometimes they're just disposable. It's even more fun when both friends are using each other, but try to hide it. |
| Cthulhu Is An Awesome God 2008-02-11 ch 1, | abuseThis sounds like a cool concept-assassins as partying thrillseekers looking for the ultimate rush. Reminds me a little of Army@love, that comic series which had a similar thing for soldiers. I'll keep my eyes peeled for the full product. |