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| xxopticaldelusions 2008-03-10 ch 1, | abuse[ review game ] I like the beginning and end quotes, it kind of puts the finishing touches onto it. I like noir (which I know is black! lol) more than blanc, though because I love the way you structured "can't you hear..." "can't you feel..." etc. I like the way you linked the hear, feel, see from noir back in blanc though. I enjoyed reading this. Great job. |
| Johnny Deathray 2008-02-11 ch 1, | abuseNice. I like how the beginning and end quotes tie the whole piece together. Johnny D.R. |
| Manuel Fajar 2008-02-11 ch 1, | abuseSophilia:— name nicely imbued with meanings and from your quotes aptly chosen. Thx 4 ur rvw. As far as your conversation:— don't you think the whole thing, the entire Universe, is an immense computational machine? & We, transitory passerbys merely have the happy serendipity to have evolved at the right moment in the Universe's entropic expansion; and, have the happy and miserable experience of being endowed with partial instruments of comprehension and apprehension,—brains and senses? Dunno, it makes my brain hurt. Back to Diana Krall's mellifluous voice & work ... m |