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| IheartStewart20 2008-02-12 ch 1, | abuseI really like this. How horrible that after losing Stefan, she has to deal with Georg and his behavior. I'm looking forward to this! More soon! |
| Clarelouise 2008-02-12 ch 1, | abuseok its really gd im reading this for the 2nd time cause im noticing things i didnt notice b4! even though its really sad i like the way you described people drowning in her eyes, it really makes it feel a bit eerie and uncomfortable, and gets across the mood very well. there are so many imaginative metaphors here that do that actually, theyre so original! keep going with this please, looks like its gunna b rele gd! x |
| Aomera 2008-02-11 ch 1, | abuseeven on reading the majority of it not for the first time i am still staggered by some of the descriptions like: 'In the flickering lamplight her normally sea-blue eyes turned into dark pools in which too many people had drowned, falling into their hidden depths, desperate to touch, to taste, to possess. They were outlined in smoky kohl and her blonde lashes, covered with mascara and perfectly curled, rested softly against her pale skin, making her eyes seem even bigger.' simply wonderful! i'm so glad you're writing more, i think it's the right thing to do. i seriously don't want to leave them all behind so more is good! xx |