   Isca 2008-06-06 . chapter 1A damn good piece! I love all of your references to Ophelia! |
 with.You.in.mind 2008-02-23 . chapter 1an entangling tone to it. I'm enjoying your work :)
great job on it; I'm catching all the grooves.
kudos |
 HelpWanted11 2008-02-22 . chapter 1This piece is gripping and powerful. The last two lines are so fitting as they truly emphasize the point you were trying to make. Anyway, awesome job.
Keep writing,
HelpWanted11 |
 Morgan Duriya 2008-02-14 . chapter 1I really like your last couple ones. Simple and to the point. I've alway wondered one thing...WHICH one is Ophelia? |
 Darla P 2008-02-13 . chapter 1like it, great poem! |
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