this story is so amazing! please update it soon.

I really like this story and am happy to see it updated, also I really liked getting Kohei's POV. Keep writing and please update again soon!

Sorry it took me so long to review this, I actually read it a few nights ago but things have been hectic lately.

This was a nice update. It seemed to flow kind of off for some reason, I dunno. Maybe it was just me but this chapter seemed less... personal, maybe? I dunno, it was still great but it just seemed somewhat off.

However, I'm happy to see the plot moving forward well and that things are getting deeper considering the involvment of Akane. It seems like we're getting closer to the bulk of the plot, eh? I can't wait for another update!

By the way, Picari Sweat is the sex.

This story's interesting. :D I wonder what's going to happen next?

I'm liking this story. I'd like to see where it goes. I really like how you said that Kohei is fasinated with death, it was an interesting character quirk. Oh and I love the title "Love Laughs at Suicide" it's catchy.

Wow, this story is very, very good. Probably one of the best slash stories I've read on here in a very long time. The thing that originally jumped out to me was the title. It's superb and eye-grabbing. A major plus there.

You've done an excellent job of blending the obvious drama of this story with a great amount of comedy, enough to ease the tension of some scenes. I love how you carefully layer in more information about Keita's past. You've done an excellent job so far of creating some awesome characters that conjure up some actually feeling. They make me want to know more about them and see this relationship, as rocky as it may be, bloom into something more. Another thing you've done a great job of is ending each of your chapters on such a note that it makes me want to read the next one. You add in enough suspense and intrigue that I really am looking forward to the next installment.

It's not too often I'll add a story to my Favorites list after my first time reading it but this story has that much potential. It's definatly a diamond in the rough that is slash fiction and I really look forward to more. I've started my own first Yaoi story and I'd be honored if you could look over it and give some advice. I can only hope it'd add up to this one as this really is one of the best slash stories currently running.

So, update soon, please and great job!

I'm not for sure what I think about this chapter. I guess I thought he was better than being homophobic so I'm a little disappointed, but I'll keep reading to see what happens. :) good job

I like it though it makes me feel a little depressed. hopefully the story will get a little lighter. :) good!

Another wonderful chapter! This keeps getting better and better!

This is a very good story so far. I don't have anything up yet, but I will soon. I'm currently working on it. Hope you continue soon with this.

Nice!! I was waiting for this to come out! And it's totally understandable for why it was late. Things happen, right? Still, very good chapter and well written and I think I'm going to enjoy next chapter to. I'm already laughing ahead of time. Also...I can't find anything to criticize... And I want to leave a good review too! Well, just know that you're insanely good at this!

I never understood wy they havea "Manga" section on here, but this is a nice story. It looks like you've done your homework on Japanese culture, and the dialog is particulary impressive. Good job. :)

Wow-ow! No really, wow. I like the dialouge you created. Kohei seems really fun, too. He seems just... Well, I want him! -steals him- :3 And the plot is fun too, you have it moving well. Thanks for my review, too. I love how cool we are. xD ...Well, you at least.

You have a good story and I hope that you continue this work. It definitely has potential.

Perhaps if you have time, you'll read someof my works. You may like them.

I like it. It's realistic and not at the same time--hopefully you get what I mean. Anyway, thanks for the little lesson on Japanese culture at the bottom of the chapter. I'm learning Japanese, but barely know the culture and I don't trust all the things on the internet, but I knew about those bicycle gangs, just never knew the name as well as many other things about them. Technically, the way you worded it as well as you used it in your story as well as the possibilities that come with such an idea...! In short, I'm really excited.

Also, I have a feeling that Kohei will become Keita's inspiration with all the experiences that he's going through now. I await you next chapter! Very nice job, you've got a fan.