 im.a.werewolf.rawr. 2009-01-22 . chapter 1love, love, love, that's all i can say.
oh, and it was beautifully written and the imagery was great (see, i knew i had a better review in me...) |
 Rose Valentine 2008-03-05 . chapter 1I can just picture the details! |
 Daiysis 2008-03-01 . chapter 10oo... it was very visual and descriptive... I like it, lol |
 That Green Gentlewoman 2008-02-11 . chapter 1that was dark and really freaky, but totally awesome. |
 Curious Passerby 2008-02-11 . chapter 1 Graphic, but skillfully handled. The interpretation of the killer as an artist is quite interesting, lovely job. |
 Tranquil Thorns 2008-02-11 . chapter 1Wow, this is creepy!
A good poem, though, and very nicely written. (:
I thought some of the words you used were very powerful; they kept me reading. I like the line 'You tore her open/Like sugar paper'. The comparison is very chilling.
I like how you started each line with a repetition of 'artist' with a different adjective before it. Very intense. |
 Artemis Anderson 2008-02-11 . chapter 1Wow. That's a whole new take on that. o.o Great job! |