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Reviews For: The Artist

Rose Valentine
2008-03-05
ch 1,
abuseI can just picture the details!
Daiysis
2008-03-01
ch 1,
abuse0oo... it was very visual and descriptive... I like it, lol
tree of life and shadow
2008-02-11
ch 1,
abusethat was dark and really freaky, but totally awesome.
Curious Passerby
2008-02-11
ch 1, anon.
abuseGraphic, but skillfully handled. The interpretation of the killer as an artist is quite interesting, lovely job.
Tranquil Thorns
2008-02-11
ch 1,
abuseWow, this is creepy!

A good poem, though, and very nicely written. (:

I thought some of the words you used were very powerful; they kept me reading. I like the line 'You tore her open/Like sugar paper'. The comparison is very chilling.

I like how you started each line with a repetition of 'artist' with a different adjective before it. Very intense.
Artemis Anderson
2008-02-11
ch 1,
abuseWow. That's a whole new take on that. o.o Great job!
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