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| Rose Valentine 2008-03-05 ch 1,  | abuseI can just picture the details! |
| Daiysis 2008-03-01 ch 1, | abuse0oo... it was very visual and descriptive... I like it, lol |
| tree of life and shadow 2008-02-11 ch 1, | abusethat was dark and really freaky, but totally awesome. |
| Curious Passerby 2008-02-11 ch 1, anon. | abuseGraphic, but skillfully handled. The interpretation of the killer as an artist is quite interesting, lovely job. |
| Tranquil Thorns 2008-02-11 ch 1, | abuseWow, this is creepy! A good poem, though, and very nicely written. (: I thought some of the words you used were very powerful; they kept me reading. I like the line 'You tore her open/Like sugar paper'. The comparison is very chilling. I like how you started each line with a repetition of 'artist' with a different adjective before it. Very intense. |
| Artemis Anderson 2008-02-11 ch 1, | abuseWow. That's a whole new take on that. o.o Great job! |