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| mackenzie 2008-06-17 ch 11, anon. | abusearggh i love this story but you havent updated in so long! i hope you havent given up on it cuz its so good! please update soon! |
| teagarden 2008-06-07 ch 11,  | abuseThis story is awesome and very interesting. I can't wait to find out what happens next! |
| Zoe 2008-05-16 ch 11, anon. | abuseHello! Ah this was a good chapter, and I'm definitely excited to see what happens next. And by the way, if anybody's updates are worth the wait, then it's yours! |
| She Had Somewhere To Go. 2008-05-13 ch 11, | abuseAWESOME I love love love it! Seriously, I could ramble forever on the awesomeness of this story - but I'm too lazy ahaha anyways, I love this story to tears, update soon! |
| Emjay-Enjay 2008-05-13 ch 11, | abuseI. abso-**-lutely LOVED this chapter. Not just cause of more Kaaya-Michael interactions, and the wonderful and detailed description of Michael's fit physique (which btw had me swooning) but because it had a little bit of everything. It was pure genius. I loved the mirror scene. No one could have pulled writing that off as brilliantly as you did. I think by far that is the one scene to which i have been able to relate with a 100% I almost KNOW i would have burst into tears if the scene were to be any longer. Thanks for that. =P I love this story and everything in it... but mostly I love you |
| SimplySweetnSour 2008-05-13 ch 11, | abuserandom guess, drew and micheal have a past and drew's going to attempt to use kaaya as revenge? :P |
| animefreakgirl 2008-05-13 ch 11, | abuseWow...I wonder how everything at the party will turn out. Hmm looking forward to the next chapter. (: |
| ForeignBelle 2008-05-13 ch 11, | abuseOkay, you had me drooling over a fictional charcter lol. I couldn't wait for this chapter and I can't wait for the next! Update when you can! |
| The Brilliance of the Mindl... 2008-05-13 ch 11, | abuseAs usual, amazingly written. Great details and realistic conversation. I feel bad for Kaaya, having slight self-esteem issues. I can't wait to see how the vacation unfolds, and what trouble Drew might bring. Update when you can. :) Rebekah |
| TokyoBox 2008-05-13 ch 11, | abuseSome competition (or at least I think)! Here's hoping to see Michael & Drew beef it out, happy writing :) |
| Emjay-Enjay 2008-05-09 ch 8, | abuseDog chewed up the wires? Yes blame poor little rex why don't you? I cant wait for the next chapter!! I really really have a good feeling about it =D I can smell the brilliance |
| Pione 2008-04-30 ch 10, | abuseHeehee. Your story is very adorable!:) |
| She Had Somewhere To Go. 2008-04-28 ch 10, | abuseGREAT! update soon :)! |
| P 2008-04-27 ch 10, anon. | abuseVery nice chapter. Nicely written. :) Can't wait for the next update! |
| animefreakgirl 2008-04-26 ch 10, | abuseOh cool...I like how you written this so far. I'm looking forward to the party they're going to have. So I'll be waiting. (: |