Wow, that was long! But it was a great story, and I really enjoyed reading it.

That was so sososo amazing! Firstly, you have NO idea how glad I am that Hayden wasn't the one Cady chose, and secondly it was absolutely adorable. I love the note Johnny wrote for Cady.
Great work!
-AG :)

Awesome and original! I loved it! ^^

I love it! It's awesome! I would totally read an entire story with these characters.

I loved this! It was super adorable, and i love Hayden. He really is a sweetie. I especially like how it ended with Cady and Johnny, with the possibility of Zoe and Hayden left. And the fact that Hayden thought he liked Cady for a while because of what Johnny said was super funny...and his klutziness makes him even perfecter. Can I have him?? PLEASE?!

Anyway, awesome story!! I love it, just the way it is. :)

It was a cliché to end the worst romantic cliché, but good execution. No, it wasn't too rushed, and it might lose steam if you turned into a multi-chaptered story. The kiss at the end WAS rather sudden, but it was redeemed by the fact that Cady wasn't making any promises.

Hayden was classic, and Johnny was even better. Tongue-in-cheek and thoroughly amusing, and I really liked how this cliché went. The love letter was effective— not sappy at all (gasp!)

"Mice and men" is Robert Burns, right?

very cute

The story idea generally was good, but yeah, it was a little too fast...maybe a lot. I think it would be awesome if you turned it into a full fledged story and actually developed the characters. Go for it!

*squee!*
okay, that was my first reaction after i finished reading. lol.

one word yay!

i really liked the writing style and kind of found myself hating hayden part way through you know. he was trying to upset cool nerdy jonny who RULES!

XD

yeah a guy and a girl can't be friends, there's always attraction between them but cute story =]

weird? very. haha. but cute in the end. the bff get who they want.

Aw, this is adorable! I love it! And yes, you should totally turn this into a story! =)

definitely fast moving, but good one too :)

Nice oneshot...yeah, it's long but it's okay. I knew Johnny liked Cady from the start! I knew it! Yeah...the thing with Johnny and Cady seemed a bit rushed though. Seriously. But it's still good, still good. Nice job.