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| kauri-blume 2008-08-05 ch 1,  | abuseone word yay! i really liked the writing style and kind of found myself hating hayden part way through you know. he was trying to upset cool nerdy jonny who RULES! XD |
| righthere431 2008-07-07 ch 1, | abuseyeah a guy and a girl can't be friends, there's always attraction between them but cute story =] |
| Jayjack 2008-06-27 ch 1, | abuseweird? very. haha. but cute in the end. the bff get who they want. |
| Faithfully Yours 2008-06-09 ch 1, | abuseAw, this is adorable! I love it! And yes, you should totally turn this into a story! =) |
| a beginner 2008-06-04 ch 1, | abusedefinitely fast moving, but good one too :) |
| centenarian 2008-05-11 ch 1, | abuseNice oneshot...yeah, it's long but it's okay. I knew Johnny liked Cady from the start! I knew it! Yeah...the thing with Johnny and Cady seemed a bit rushed though. Seriously. But it's still good, still good. Nice job. |
| haruku 2008-05-04 ch 1, | abuseHey...this is like a re-do on Cyrano de Bergerac(Lol. I must have been like the fifth person to have said that.) This is cute, and I like how Cady not totally superficial*cough*Roxane*cough* It's also pretty cool since it's also a variation on the "best friends fall in love vs. fall in love with your supposed enemy" cliches. Cute. xHaruku |
| Lily Llynn 2008-04-09 ch 1, | abuseLOL yes it's long, and yes it did move a bit fast (For the Cady-Johnny romance). I wouldn't mind seeing this as a chaptered story, but it also works as a oneshot. Well-written as always, Sally, and of course, fantastic characters. (: Love this, and I'm jealous xoxluurve added this to our c2 before I did. Hehe. (: |
| wandless 2008-04-06 ch 1, | abuseHey! Dude, that was an AWESOME fic. Totally unexpected, judging by what you'd expect from a one-shot about two best friends. I definitely think you should turn this into a longer story. It was lovely! Incredibly cute and sweet. :D I would've liked to hear more from Johnny's point of view, and what happens after they kiss. Poor Hayden will be all confused! Have a good day! Liz. |
| Angel of Ink 2008-03-30 ch 1, | abuseI likes it. :) |
| Incurable Dreamer 2008-03-30 ch 1, | abuseI loved this! You fooled me all the way to the end. At one point, I actually thought that Johnny liked Hayden (I don't know where that came from, but I guess I just interpreted the lines, "Johnny’s voice cracked, revealing the most miniscule moment of nervousness that he would ever let on around Hayden", and " That was another thing Johnny liked about Hayden" as something more than they should have been XD It's probably not the healthiest thing for a mind to be reading at 5 in the morning). It was so delightful reading a story about a girl and a boy being best friends without having them fall in love. Great story! |
| under the influence 2008-03-24 ch 1, | abuseaw...I would love to see it as an entire story...parts of it felt rushed and some things needed to be explained more. There were parts that were really cute and other parts that made me chuckle...good start :) |
| CaliGirls.AtHeart 2008-03-23 ch 1, | abusei loved this. i totally think that u should make it into a story. i will totally read it. |
| cheimpo17 2008-03-23 ch 1, | abuseI like this as a one-shot. Very well done. |
| gulistanlik 2008-03-22 ch 1, | abuseI KNEW Johnny and Cady were going to end up together, hehe. I mean all the hints, plus it just didn't make sense for Cady and Hayden to end up together! =D Nice! I really liked this! gulistanlik |